I need my post rewritten. I’m not good at putting words on paper.
There is a word minimum of 150-200 words.
Please use what I have written to work with.
Writing instructions: In the introductory post, identify one area of
struggle and one area where I succeeded. Then explain how I managed to persevere when I struggled and how I accomplished my success.
I feel I struggled with my thesis statement. Either my statement was too broad and I needed to narrow it down or it was more than needed and I needed to shorten it. I feel that like it was so much information I needed to fit into one sentence.
I feel like I succeeded in making sure I listed enough information for my readers to be able to have a good understanding on what I was writing about as if they had no knowledge of the topic.
I feel like the feedback I received from my classmates and instructor really helped me to get better at wording my thesis statement. I didnt realize it was not a very good statement until it was pointed out to me.
I accomplished my success by really getting into the article I was writing about trying to make sure I listed some very good points about the topic.
